Comments on: Shikayat http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/ writings of nitin gupta Tue, 27 Oct 2009 05:41:50 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Nitin Gupta http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-42 Nitin Gupta Fri, 20 Jul 2007 06:42:14 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-42 @Ravish, Manu: Mirza Ghalib is the best when it comes to expressing the feeling of nothingness and craving in front of the lover! His every single line contains a lot. @Ravish, Manu: Mirza Ghalib is the best when it comes to expressing the feeling of nothingness and craving in front of the lover! His every single line contains a lot.

]]> By: Manu http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-41 Manu Sun, 15 Jul 2007 19:30:13 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-41 These lines are by Mirza Ghalib.. Unke dekhe se jo aa jaati hai muh par ronak.. wo samjhte hain ki bimaar ka haal achcha hai... Na tha kuch to khuda tha, na hota kuch to khuda hota.. duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota... These lines are by Mirza Ghalib..

Unke dekhe se jo aa jaati hai muh par ronak.. wo samjhte hain ki bimaar ka haal achcha hai…

Na tha kuch to khuda tha, na hota kuch to khuda hota..
duboya mujhko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota…

]]> By: Ravish Mishra http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-40 Ravish Mishra Thu, 12 Jul 2007 09:45:21 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-40 Shikayat to humein bhi hai unse, ki unhone ek nazar mudkar na dekha, hum to unki raahon main aankhen bichaye baithe hain tabse, aur woh hai ki ghar se baahar nikalte hi nahi....... ye to meri taraf se tha... ab mirza galib ki taraf se bhi kuch kahe deta hoon.... "hazaaroN KHwahishaiN 'eisee ke har KHwahish pe dam nikle bohot nikle mere armaaN lekin phir bhee kam nikle Dare kyooN mera qaatil kya rahega uskee gardan par wo KHooN, jo chashm-e-tar se 'umr bhar yooN dam_ba_dam nikle nikalna KHuld se aadam ka sunte aayaiN haiN lekin bohot be_aabru hokar tere kooche se ham nikle bharam khul jaaye zaalim tere qaamat ki daraazee ka agar is turra-e-pur_pech-o-KHam ka pech-o-KHam nikle magar likhwaaye koee usko KHat, to hamse likhawaaye huee subah aur ghar se kaan par rakhkar qalam nikle huee is daur meiN mansoob mujhse baada_aashaamee phir aaya wo zamaana, jo jahaaN se jaam-e-jam nikle huee jinse tavaqqo KHastagee kee daad paane kee wo hamse bhee ziyaada KHasta-e-teGH-e-sitam nikle mohabbat meiN naheeN hai farq jeene aur marne kaa usee ko dekh kar jeete haiN jis kaafir pe dam nikle zara kar jor seene par ki teer-e-pursitam nikle jo wo nikle to dil nikle, jo dil nikle to dam nikle KHuda ke waaste parda na kaabe se uThaa zaalim kaheeN 'eisa na ho yaaN bhee wohee kaafir sanam nikle kahaaN maiKHaane ka darwaaza 'GHalib' aur kahaaN waaiz par itana jaante haiN kal wo jaata tha ke ham nikle" Cheers!!! Shikayat to humein bhi hai unse,
ki unhone ek nazar mudkar na dekha,
hum to unki raahon main aankhen bichaye baithe hain tabse,
aur woh hai ki ghar se baahar nikalte hi nahi…….

ye to meri taraf se tha…
ab mirza galib ki taraf se bhi kuch kahe deta hoon….

“hazaaroN KHwahishaiN ‘eisee ke har KHwahish pe dam nikle
bohot nikle mere armaaN lekin phir bhee kam nikle

Dare kyooN mera qaatil kya rahega uskee gardan par
wo KHooN, jo chashm-e-tar se ‘umr bhar yooN dam_ba_dam nikle

nikalna KHuld se aadam ka sunte aayaiN haiN lekin
bohot be_aabru hokar tere kooche se ham nikle

bharam khul jaaye zaalim tere qaamat ki daraazee ka
agar is turra-e-pur_pech-o-KHam ka pech-o-KHam nikle

magar likhwaaye koee usko KHat, to hamse likhawaaye
huee subah aur ghar se kaan par rakhkar qalam nikle

huee is daur meiN mansoob mujhse baada_aashaamee
phir aaya wo zamaana, jo jahaaN se jaam-e-jam nikle

huee jinse tavaqqo KHastagee kee daad paane kee
wo hamse bhee ziyaada KHasta-e-teGH-e-sitam nikle

mohabbat meiN naheeN hai farq jeene aur marne kaa
usee ko dekh kar jeete haiN jis kaafir pe dam nikle

zara kar jor seene par ki teer-e-pursitam nikle
jo wo nikle to dil nikle, jo dil nikle to dam nikle

KHuda ke waaste parda na kaabe se uThaa zaalim
kaheeN ‘eisa na ho yaaN bhee wohee kaafir sanam nikle

kahaaN maiKHaane ka darwaaza ‘GHalib’ aur kahaaN waaiz
par itana jaante haiN kal wo jaata tha ke ham nikle”

Cheers!!!

]]> By: Anonymous http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-39 Anonymous Mon, 02 Apr 2007 21:46:07 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-39 Awesome kavita Nitin! espe bayan-e-haal-e-dil :-) keep writing.. Awesome kavita Nitin! espe bayan-e-haal-e-dil :-) keep writing..

]]> By: nitiniitk http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-38 nitiniitk Wed, 28 Mar 2007 17:14:20 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-38 @Ankit: inke saamne to meri kavita ekdam telu lag rahi hai :) bahut hi bakait! @Mangal: waah ustaad waah! @Ankit: inke saamne to meri kavita ekdam telu lag rahi hai :) bahut hi bakait!

@Mangal: waah ustaad waah!

]]> By: Nitin Mangal http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-37 Nitin Mangal Wed, 28 Mar 2007 04:32:14 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-37 शिकयत पर दो पंकतियाँ हमरि भी हम गिला कया करेन वो बेवफ़ा भी नहिन हमने जो सुन लिया उसने कहा भी नहिन शिकयत पर दो पंकतियाँ हमरि भी

हम गिला कया करेन वो बेवफ़ा भी नहिन
हमने जो सुन लिया उसने कहा भी नहिन

]]> By: Anonymous http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-36 Anonymous Wed, 28 Mar 2007 04:31:35 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-36 शिकयत पर दो पंकतियाँ हमरि भी हम गिला कया करेन वो बेवफ़ा भी नहिन हमने जो सुन लिया उसने कहा भी नहिन शिकयत पर दो पंकतियाँ हमरि भी

हम गिला कया करेन वो बेवफ़ा भी नहिन
हमने जो सुन लिया उसने कहा भी नहिन

]]> By: Ankit http://bhasadalaya.wordpress.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-35 Ankit Mon, 26 Mar 2007 00:09:30 +0000 http://ngupta.com/2007/03/25/shikayat/#comment-35 बहुत सुंदर लिखा है । पढ़के कुछ पंक्तियां याद आ गयीं: गुलशन की फकत फूलों से नहीं, कांटों से भी ज़ीनत होती है जीने के लिये इस दुनिया में गम की भी ज़रूरत होती है वो पुरशीशे गम को आये हैं, कुछ कह न सकूं चुप रह ना सकूं खामोश रहूं तो मुश्किल है, कह दूं तो शिकायत होती है बहुत सुंदर लिखा है । पढ़के कुछ पंक्तियां याद आ गयीं:

गुलशन की फकत फूलों से नहीं, कांटों से भी ज़ीनत होती है
जीने के लिये इस दुनिया में गम की भी ज़रूरत होती है

वो पुरशीशे गम को आये हैं, कुछ कह न सकूं चुप रह ना सकूं
खामोश रहूं तो मुश्किल है, कह दूं तो शिकायत होती है

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