bhasadalaya

Paagal

Posted in Uncategorized by Nitin Gupta on November 16, 2006

dhan, bal, gyaan se poorna hua
man se ghayal ho chuka hoon

sooni aankhon mein lag na saka
vyarth kaajal ho chuka hoon

baras na saka tarasti dharti par
nikamma baadal ho chuka hoon

ghar sona bhara, par so na saka
haan mein paagal ho chuka hoon

jeevan saadhanon ki hod mein
jeene ka kaaran kho chuka hoon

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  1. nikhil said, on November 16, 2006 at 4:15 pm

    uttam kavita hai. acha laga pad ke.

    one suggestion, you might try shuffling the order of the lines.

  2. nitiniitk said, on November 16, 2006 at 6:15 pm

    @nikhil: implemented your suggestion, and swapped the 4th and 5th stanzas.. thanks!

  3. Ankit said, on November 17, 2006 at 6:48 am

    bahute sundar kavita likhi hai phantom jee… bahute sundar

  4. Chhaparwal said, on November 20, 2006 at 5:55 am

    daddu.. achhi likhi hai.. kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi lagta hai aisa.. par..


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