dhan, bal, gyaan se poorna hua
man se ghayal ho chuka hoon
sooni aankhon mein lag na saka
vyarth kaajal ho chuka hoon
baras na saka tarasti dharti par
nikamma baadal ho chuka hoon
ghar sona bhara, par so na saka
haan mein paagal ho chuka hoon
jeevan saadhanon ki hod mein
jeene ka kaaran kho chuka hoon
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uttam kavita hai. acha laga pad ke.
one suggestion, you might try shuffling the order of the lines.
@nikhil: implemented your suggestion, and swapped the 4th and 5th stanzas.. thanks!
bahute sundar kavita likhi hai phantom jee… bahute sundar
daddu.. achhi likhi hai.. kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi lagta hai aisa.. par..
Lovely lines!